Sentence 1: original mr. palonia says that there are some athletes who are on this here team that believe noone should not have any practice corrected Mr. Palonia says that there are some athletes on this team who believe everyone should practice.
Sentence 2: original to ensure success they should require those in the project the ones doing the experiment too have new lab equipment corrected To ensure success, the teachers should require those in the project doing the experiment to have new lab equipment.
DOL 4
Sentence 1: original darnel dont have no reason too question them instructions but he does want a explanation for this here exam corrected Darnel doesn't have any reason to question their instructions, but he wants an explanation for this exam.
Sentence 2: original me and olga went downtown we went to buy new notebooks we need them for class we also need them for our long term project corrected Olga and I went downtown to buy new notebooks for class and our long-term project.
DOL 5
Sentence 1: original yes terri won the game but at the time we dont know that she had corrected Yes, Terri won the game, but at that time, we didn't know that she had.
Sentence 2: original the affect of the program cancellation which bothered most of we members was to end the project before we can finish corrected The effect of the program cancellation, which bothered most of us members, was to end the project before we could finish.
DOL 6
Sentence 1: original because you should of heard their voice when i told them how there vacaion time would be effected corrected You should have heard their voice when I told them how their vacation time would be affected.
Sentence 2: original irregardless of what grandpa says itll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration corrected Regardless of what Grandpa said, it will be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration.
DOL 7
Sentence 1: original rob commentd that us neighbors has got to be welcoming to children outside of our neighborhood he mentioned to us corrected Rob commented that our neighbors should welcome children from outside of our neighborhood.
Sentence 2: original neither ben or me because we hae not read the assignment knew the definition of the word chide corrected Because neither Ben nor I has not read the assignment, we don't know the definition of the word chide.
DOL 8
Sentence 1: original marcus a serious athlete tries very hard im sure he will see alot of action in todays game corrected Marcus, a serious athlete, tries very hard; I am sure he will see a lot of action in today's game.
Sentence 2: original the reace between the three relay teams is close none of the 3 however are giving up hope of winning corrected The race between the three relay teams is close; however, none of the three is giving up hope of winning.
DOL 9
Sentence 1: original ms perez the science teacher stated within a short time free-electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity did because it changed the world corrected Ms.Perez, the science teacher, stated, "Within a short time, free-electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity."
Sentence 2: original yesterday mom told us that whomever borrows her new sweater have to take it to the cleaners corrected Yesterday, Mom told us that whomever borrows her new sweater, has to take it to the cleaners.
DOL 10
Sentence 1: original our Social Studies teacher asked us who have her as a teacher to write reports ont he south she said it was to be an emphasis on african americans corrected Our social studies teacher asked us to write reports on the South, with an emphasis on African Americans.
Sentence 2: original well i think someones mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us girls to the concert corrected I think someone's mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us girls to the concert.
DOL 11
Sentence 1: original my oldest sister whose going to live in the new east town apartments wants youre help moving in tonite corrected My oldest sister, who is going to live in the New East Town Apartments, wants your help moving in tonight.
Sentence 2: original at the end of her speech amanda said if you need farther informations dont hesitate to ask me for more information corrected At the end of her speech, Amanda said, "If you need further information, don't hesitate to ask me."
DOL 12
Sentence 1: original having read the novel the man in the iron mask i wanna find out more about the french revolution corrected Having read the novel The Man in the Iron Mask, I want to find out more about the French Revolution.
Sentence 2: original there were to many things to do i couldnt finish my homework practicing my soccer skills or go to my friends concert corrected There were too many things to do: I couldn't finish my homework, practice my soccer skills, or go to my friend's concert.
DOL 13
Sentence 1: original mr. Guarino told us that the 24th corps which was assigned to germany after world war 2 helped maintain peace in that there country corrected Mr. Guarino told us that the Twenty-fourth Corps, which was assigned to Germany after World War II, helped maintain peace in that country.
Sentence 2: original having finished her foreign exchange trip a plane ticket was requested to the united states at the end of her foreign exchange trip corrected Having finished her foreign exchange trip, she requested a plane ticket to the United States.
DOL 14
Sentence 1: original i reviewed the book real good i received a good grade on the report said Sonia corrected "I reviewed the book well, and I received a good grade on the report," said Sonia
Sentence 2: original although we had 25 inches of show last Winter the bushes appear to be alright pedro noted corrected "Although we had twenty-five inches of snow last winter, the bushes appear to be all right," Pedro noted.
DOL 15
Sentence 1: original he was incidentally unable to attend hour 15th high-school reunion he just couldn't make it because he lives too far away corrected He was unable to attend our fifteenth high school reunion, because he lives too far away.
Sentence 2: original it says that irregardless of the effect of poor weather the shakespearean play romeo and juliet will be sold out corrected Bob says that regardless of poor weather, the Shakespearean play Romeo and Juliet will be sold out.
DOL 16
Sentence 1: original you should of followed three steps first open the hood secondly checking the level and lastly add more oil corrected You should have followed three steps: firstly, open the hood; secondly check the level; and lastly, add more oil.
Sentence 2: original although my dog is different than yours we wont have no problem walking them to together corrected Although my dog is different from yours, we won't have any problem walking them together.
DOL 17
Sentence 1: original does caroline know weather raul might of come to the class council meeting at 600pm or was he off of student government corrected Does Caroline know whether Raul might have come to the class council meeting at 6:00 p.m. or was he off student government?
Sentence 2: original there are 3 qualities that are existing that give this field hockey team the better advantage in the league a terrific goalie a great offense and a winning spirit corrected There are three qualities that give this field hockey team the advantage in the league: a terrific goalie, a great offense, and a winning spirit.
DOL 18
Sentence 1: original walking quiet along the road it was impossible for me to see that car that was speeding corrected Walking quietly along the road, it was impossible to see the speeding car.
Sentence 2: original after the race begins delia take these here medals to the track club at the school located East of here corrected After the race begins, Delia, take these medals to the track club at school on the east side of the school.
DOL 19
Sentence 1: original nothing could be farther from the truth mr perez stated than your comments corrected "Nothing could be further from the truth," Mr. Perez stated, "Than your comments."
Sentence 2: original she was quite young no more than 26 when she earned her doctorate consequently she began her career early corrected She was quite young, no more than twenty-six, when she earned her doctorate; consequently, she began her career early.
DOL 20
Sentence 1: original yes their going to welcome whomever want to come to the rally weather democrat or republican corrected Yes, they are going to welcome whoever wants to come to the rally, whether Democrat or Republican.
Sentence 2: original this car a 1966 mustang is now extremely valuable irregardless of what he tv show classic cars reports corrected This car, a 1966 Mustang, is now extremely valuable, regardless of what the TV show Classic Cars reports.
DOL 21
Sentence 1: original because it snowed heavy last night so its alright if noone comes to basketball practice because of all the snow corrected Because it snowed heavily last night, it is all right if no one comes to basketball practice.
Sentence 2: original they mentioned i believe that on january 2 2000 this here building was seventy five years old corrected They mentioned that on January 2, 2000, this building were seventy-five years old.
DOL 22
Sentence 1: original follow some simple rules and youll succeed listen in class doing your homework and learn as much as possible corrected Follow some simple rules and you'll succeed: listen in class, do your homework, and learn as much as possible.
Sentence 2: original in order to interest larry his role in the play has got to be made more challenging martina stated corrected "In order to interest Larry, his role in the play has to be more challenging," Martina stated.
Daily Oral Language
DOL 1: NA
DOL 2: NA
DOL 3
Sentence 1:
original mr. palonia says that there are some athletes who are on this here team that believe noone should not have any practice
corrected Mr. Palonia says that there are some athletes on this team who believe everyone should practice.
Sentence 2:
original to ensure success they should require those in the project the ones doing the experiment too have new lab equipment
corrected To ensure success, the teachers should require those in the project doing the experiment to have new lab equipment.
DOL 4
Sentence 1:
original darnel dont have no reason too question them instructions but he does want a explanation for this here exam
corrected Darnel doesn't have any reason to question their instructions, but he wants an explanation for this exam.
Sentence 2:
original me and olga went downtown we went to buy new notebooks we need them for class we also need them for our long term project
corrected Olga and I went downtown to buy new notebooks for class and our long-term project.
DOL 5
Sentence 1:
original yes terri won the game but at the time we dont know that she had
corrected Yes, Terri won the game, but at that time, we didn't know that she had.
Sentence 2:
original the affect of the program cancellation which bothered most of we members was to end the project before we can finish
corrected The effect of the program cancellation, which bothered most of us members, was to end the project before we could finish.
DOL 6
Sentence 1:
original because you should of heard their voice when i told them how there vacaion time would be effected
corrected You should have heard their voice when I told them how their vacation time would be affected.
Sentence 2:
original irregardless of what grandpa says itll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration
corrected Regardless of what Grandpa said, it will be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration.
DOL 7
Sentence 1:
original rob commentd that us neighbors has got to be welcoming to children outside of our neighborhood he mentioned to us
corrected Rob commented that our neighbors should welcome children from outside of our neighborhood.
Sentence 2:
original neither ben or me because we hae not read the assignment knew the definition of the word chide
corrected Because neither Ben nor I has not read the assignment, we don't know the definition of the word chide.
DOL 8
Sentence 1:
original marcus a serious athlete tries very hard im sure he will see alot of action in todays game
corrected Marcus, a serious athlete, tries very hard; I am sure he will see a lot of action in today's game.
Sentence 2:
original the reace between the three relay teams is close none of the 3 however are giving up hope of winning
corrected The race between the three relay teams is close; however, none of the three is giving up hope of winning.
DOL 9
Sentence 1:
original ms perez the science teacher stated within a short time free-electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity did because it changed the world
corrected Ms.Perez, the science teacher, stated, "Within a short time, free-electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity."
Sentence 2:
original yesterday mom told us that whomever borrows her new sweater have to take it to the cleaners
corrected Yesterday, Mom told us that whomever borrows her new sweater, has to take it to the cleaners.
DOL 10
Sentence 1:
original our Social Studies teacher asked us who have her as a teacher to write reports ont he south she said it was to be an emphasis on african americans
corrected Our social studies teacher asked us to write reports on the South, with an emphasis on African Americans.
Sentence 2:
original well i think someones mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us girls to the concert
corrected I think someone's mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us girls to the concert.
DOL 11
Sentence 1:
original my oldest sister whose going to live in the new east town apartments wants youre help moving in tonite
corrected My oldest sister, who is going to live in the New East Town Apartments, wants your help moving in tonight.
Sentence 2:
original at the end of her speech amanda said if you need farther informations dont hesitate to ask me for more information
corrected At the end of her speech, Amanda said, "If you need further information, don't hesitate to ask me."
DOL 12
Sentence 1:
original having read the novel the man in the iron mask i wanna find out more about the french revolution
corrected Having read the novel The Man in the Iron Mask, I want to find out more about the French Revolution.
Sentence 2:
original there were to many things to do i couldnt finish my homework practicing my soccer skills or go to my friends concert
corrected There were too many things to do: I couldn't finish my homework, practice my soccer skills, or go to my friend's concert.
DOL 13
Sentence 1:
original mr. Guarino told us that the 24th corps which was assigned to germany after world war 2 helped maintain peace in that there country
corrected Mr. Guarino told us that the Twenty-fourth Corps, which was assigned to Germany after World War II, helped maintain peace in that country.
Sentence 2:
original having finished her foreign exchange trip a plane ticket was requested to the united states at the end of her foreign exchange trip
corrected Having finished her foreign exchange trip, she requested a plane ticket to the United States.
DOL 14
Sentence 1:
original i reviewed the book real good i received a good grade on the report said Sonia
corrected "I reviewed the book well, and I received a good grade on the report," said Sonia
Sentence 2:
original although we had 25 inches of show last Winter the bushes appear to be alright pedro noted
corrected "Although we had twenty-five inches of snow last winter, the bushes appear to be all right," Pedro noted.
DOL 15
Sentence 1:
original he was incidentally unable to attend hour 15th high-school reunion he just couldn't make it because he lives too far away
corrected He was unable to attend our fifteenth high school reunion, because he lives too far away.
Sentence 2:
original it says that irregardless of the effect of poor weather the shakespearean play romeo and juliet will be sold out
corrected Bob says that regardless of poor weather, the Shakespearean play Romeo and Juliet will be sold out.
DOL 16
Sentence 1:
original you should of followed three steps first open the hood secondly checking the level and lastly add more oil
corrected You should have followed three steps: firstly, open the hood; secondly check the level; and lastly, add more oil.
Sentence 2:
original although my dog is different than yours we wont have no problem walking them to together
corrected Although my dog is different from yours, we won't have any problem walking them together.
DOL 17
Sentence 1:
original does caroline know weather raul might of come to the class council meeting at 600pm or was he off of student government
corrected Does Caroline know whether Raul might have come to the class council meeting at 6:00 p.m. or was he off student government?
Sentence 2:
original there are 3 qualities that are existing that give this field hockey team the better advantage in the league a terrific goalie a great offense and a winning spirit
corrected There are three qualities that give this field hockey team the advantage in the league: a terrific goalie, a great offense, and a winning spirit.
DOL 18
Sentence 1:
original walking quiet along the road it was impossible for me to see that car that was speeding
corrected Walking quietly along the road, it was impossible to see the speeding car.
Sentence 2:
original after the race begins delia take these here medals to the track club at the school located East of here
corrected After the race begins, Delia, take these medals to the track club at school on the east side of the school.
DOL 19
Sentence 1:
original nothing could be farther from the truth mr perez stated than your comments
corrected "Nothing could be further from the truth," Mr. Perez stated, "Than your comments."
Sentence 2:
original she was quite young no more than 26 when she earned her doctorate consequently she began her career early
corrected She was quite young, no more than twenty-six, when she earned her doctorate; consequently, she began her career early.
DOL 20
Sentence 1:
original yes their going to welcome whomever want to come to the rally weather democrat or republican
corrected Yes, they are going to welcome whoever wants to come to the rally, whether Democrat or Republican.
Sentence 2:
original this car a 1966 mustang is now extremely valuable irregardless of what he tv show classic cars reports
corrected This car, a 1966 Mustang, is now extremely valuable, regardless of what the TV show Classic Cars reports.
DOL 21
Sentence 1:
original because it snowed heavy last night so its alright if noone comes to basketball practice because of all the snow
corrected Because it snowed heavily last night, it is all right if no one comes to basketball practice.
Sentence 2:
original they mentioned i believe that on january 2 2000 this here building was seventy five years old
corrected They mentioned that on January 2, 2000, this building were seventy-five years old.
DOL 22
Sentence 1:
original follow some simple rules and youll succeed listen in class doing your homework and learn as much as possible
corrected Follow some simple rules and you'll succeed: listen in class, do your homework, and learn as much as possible.
Sentence 2:
original in order to interest larry his role in the play has got to be made more challenging martina stated
corrected "In order to interest Larry, his role in the play has to be more challenging," Martina stated.